wizardman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bathroom Break]

Cool

I thought that this flash was pretty fun to watch. It seemed to jump from plot to plot, but it was still cool. The animation, graphics, and music were all generally good. I liked how he got free fro the door, though the part regardig the hamburger was confusing, as I don't think he actually ever ate it. The ending was interesting as well, but I think I understand that part at least.

[TANKMAN 3]

Not as good as the first two

Then again, it wasn't made by the same guys. You basically take a good flash, keep the good graphics, but you take away the humor and replace it with a different style. one of the problems was that the volume was a problem. The soft was very soft, plus the dialogue was rather boring. You try to emulate the stuff from Tankmen instead of being semi-original, and in the end if just makes this flash not work.

gonz0 responds:

i hated the flash so i made fun of the shitty humor

[First Fullbody Animation]

Nice

I'll be one to say that your title is kind of a turn-off. Titles that are something along the lines of first flash are generally looked down upon, even though there are cases where the animation is actually very good. The graphics are really good, the sound is good, and the animation was pretty well put together. My main problem is that the arms were still sticks, but already it was far better than I was expecting.

[Something Fishy]

Could be better

Well, thsi was a pretty good first flash. The graphics are defnitely very good, and you can at least make them do stuff well. BBy that same token, you need to fix your animation. I'm not sure if the choppiness was done on purpose, but if not you should really fix that. That made the falsh a bit harder to watch. Although the music was annoying, it worked well with the flash. You have the basiocs of flash down, just keep practicing.

[Lines 2]

Nice

When I saw the icon at first, I wasn't looking forwards to the flash all that much. That being said, it was pretty good. There were a couple parts that I didn't care for all that much, plus some parts weren't actually lines. The music you added in fit well with the flash, and I found this overall enjkoyable, since some of the things you did with the lines were impressive enough. What happened to lines 1 though?

notorious responds:

Thanks for the good review! Lines 1, unfortunately, was not good enough to make it into the portal :( Oh well, might be a good thing that it didn't make it in lol.

[Mario VS Jesus - Part 1]

ugh

Never has the phrase "y helo thar choppy flash animation" been able to be used in a more perfect setting. A good plotline has been severely harmed because either you put your fps WAY too low or you're still getting the hang of flash animation. The sounds were good, the spirtes were used well enough, and the flash itself was pretty entertaining, just the animation needs a complete overhaul.

[Gost Files 1 SE]

Not that great

My main problem was that the flash cartoons didn't really exist. The animation for the introduction wasn't all that bad, and of cuorse the music was good, but the flash was just two things with the question mark on them. Yuo could have definitely improved in this flash. I mean, I could barely get what the flash was supposed to be about.