You have a lot of potential.
This was a very weird flash. I'm not sure I knew what was going on. First off, the sound was terrible. I couldn't understand what was being said, nor did I know if the guy or some mysterious figure was saying it. On the plus side, despite the lack of background, the graphics were great. The animation if still somewhat choppy, but you have a great base to work with so far. Just practics a little bit with smoothing out movement and you'll be a pretty good flash artist.