Score: 3

"Arguably your best flash"

submission: WELCHES JUICEGIRLSUXDICK!

date: July 28, 2006

Granted, that's not sayign much. That's really not sayign much, but it's true. The graphics weren't all too bad. I at least knew what everything was, and the grapces in particular were drawn somewhat well (I assume the gun you did not draw). Her dialogue was pretty funny, since she pretty much said the same thing over and over. Overall , not too bad, I like the ending with the blood.

Score: 1

"Um..."

submission: The Great Mighty Poo...

date: July 28, 2006

Part of me almost liked this for some reason. It was longer and almost better than most of your flashes, so I'll give you the 1 in this case. Again, everythign went by way too fast for me to read, which was pretty annoying. Second, everything that was happening was so random that it was pretty funny. At least Conker and Banjo weren't drawn too terribly, and they're deaths add at least an ounce of respect to this.

Score: 10

"Awesome"

submission: Claveman Ep. 2/5

date: July 28, 2006

Yet again, this series astonishes me with its awesomeness. There were a couple very small things I had a problem with. It was slightly less humorous then the first (which may have been the best ever, so dont' worry), and during the music running scene, the music drowned out most of twhat Claveman was saying. If you could tyr and fix that for next time, that would make it better. Still, awesoem graphics and everything else make this flash brilliant.

Score: 0

"no"

submission: Pokemon Uncencored

date: July 28, 2006

Yeah, this was some pretty sick stuff. What's also sick is that I got a laugh out of a couple of the weirder pics, like the one with James and his newfound tits. Still, the buttons weren't too bad, and you didn't need much of a background since the pics took up quite a bit of room, but at least add in some sound next time. It would make the slideshow (That's all it is) a lot better overall.

Score: 1

"ok"

submission: I <3 clocks!

date: July 28, 2006

That picture of bedn may very well have been one of the worst photoshopping jobs I've ever seen. Seriosuly, I couldn't tell what was bedn and what wasn't. The clock voice added in wasn't too bad, although I think the words should've come up before the voice said it so we could follow along. If you did that the the flash actually wouldn't be half bad imo, since I could tell you had something going with the images and stuff.

Score: 1

"wtf??"

submission: How da bitch stole Xmas!!

date: July 28, 2006

Um... exactly what was going on in that flash? After hearing that awful mic work, I would've actually preferred your classic clock voice in this one. The graphics were kina hard to follow. Taht one guy with the big eye was pretty cool, but I couldn't tell after that. At least the text was easy to read. The ending was kinda confusing though, mainly because I couldn't tell where it began and where it ended.

Score: 1

"Interesting"

submission: clock day (great present)

date: July 28, 2006

Of course, I actually believe that you are coolboyman. Knowing his flashes and the odd humor in yours and his, it's somewhat obvious that the two of you are one in the same. Your addition of the B was fun to see, and you throwing in the Rugby Bunch was... very weird. Yeah, it didnt' link to anything , it was just there, but oh well. Nice to see you give otu your secret identity, now we know who you are......yeah.

Score: 0

"Nope"

submission: A Ki10 Cartoon

date: July 28, 2006

It was interesting to see how Ki10 was goign to handle being in his opwn show, but there were problems from the beginning. First off, the text went by way to fast to read. Second, he only appears in half the frames (2 out of 4). That combined with no animation, sound, background, plot,and lack of eggs after he said he liked them left me disappointed.

Score: 7

"I'm famous, goody >_<"

submission: Newground$ Tutorial 2

date: July 28, 2006

Yep, I found the special easter egg made for me, lol (Dunno if the whistle's coded or if it automatically goes to me for everyone)
Anyway, this was basically the same as the first one. The only things you added were the music on/off button, and links to the different levels and stuff. That being said, you have no link for weekly users' choice, just the other 4. This was better though.

Score: 6

"Simple yet effective"

submission: Newground$ Tutorial

date: July 28, 2006

This tutorial was pretty basic, yet really helpful to noobs starting out in Newgrounds. I’ve seen most of this on other tutorials, but this one combined everything pretty well and even threw in a couple of extra things. I like the detail you went on exp. In particular since so many people don’t seem to get that. My only problem is that I would’ve liked it to have been more aesthetically pleasing.