Score: 7

"Uh...."

submission: The Most Horrible Story

date: October 22, 2007

Well, it was certainly a different approach. It's one of those flashes that you feel bad for laughing at but you laugh at anyway. It gae me a chuckle at a few spots, and the bad animation was rather symbolic, so I can see why that was done. The Sunny D thing as the end made it worth it to watch the whole thing. It didn't make me laugh the way it made others, but it definitely wasn't a bad flash.

Score: 8

"Way better"

submission: TooF Rock Out

date: October 20, 2007

I thought this one was a lot funnier, and a nice step up. Now that you kinda figured out where this is going, everything seemed to fall into place more. Still relatively simple graphics, yet everything humor-wise clicked, and it was just a joy to watch. It was a very solid flash, but I think you can do even better actually, push this flash a little bit more with the farting and swearing.

Score: 6

"An alright start to the series"

submission: TooF Bad Breath

date: October 20, 2007

I didn't like it quite as much as I thought I would, but it overall wasn't too bad. Very simple graphics, yet they looked very good at the same time based on how you made them. The animation was decent, though also rather simple. The again, I think the whole thing was meant to be simple, with a few laughs strewn in. Assuming that was the goal I'd say you pulled it off. Hopefully the next ones will improve though.

Score: 1

"Nope"

submission: PACC tha Movie! *****

date: October 17, 2007

There were a few problems that hurt the quality of this flash that could've been improved. The graphics were very choppy, and it was difficult to tell what was what at times, since things that shouldn't have been moving were moving, like the backgrounds. Plus, the music needs to be looped better, as it sounded rather iffy.

Score: 7

"Funny"

submission: Bill Clinton Talking Doll

date: October 9, 2007

Haha, watching it many years later, it seems to have a better feel to it, go figure. I mean, sure the jokes were expected, it's the same for most Bill Clinton flashes, but the sound was very good, the graphics were good, and it was overall very funny. The doll humping the leg was great too, and the way the flash was constructed made it that much more enjoyable.

Score: 0

"Hmm."

submission: Britney Spears fucks sis.

date: October 5, 2007

I have one main problem with your flash. Okay, so your flash had no graphics, animation, sound, background, or anything, no big deal, that can be fixed with experience and a nice fan base. That's not the problem I had. My problem is that technically you already posted this here at portal submission #16953.
By doing that, it basically sends the message that sending the same thing in twice is a good thing.

Score: 8

"I enjoyed it"

submission: I hate winter!

date: October 4, 2007

This was quite the entertaining flash, definitely made me laugh. Similar format to your first one, the guy's standing there, and some bad things happen to him. The randomness made me laugh, and it was very believable misfortunes that happened to him, which made it funnier. Could have been funnier, but I really liked it.

Score: 7

"Very good"

submission: Computer-freak 4 life!

date: October 4, 2007

I really like this kind of style in terms of the animation. It felt pretty realistic, everything ran smoothly, and I like the way everything looked. It had that ineresting feel of suspense and loneliness. There wasn't too much of a plot in it, the phone and the fly were great though. The rocket felt a little out of place compared to the rest of the flash. Overall I enjoyed it though.

Score: 2

"hmm.."

submission: cart22n about my m8s

date: October 2, 2007

I like the salad fingers imagery you threw in at the end of part I. I understand that this is supposed to be satire, but that doesn't mean I shouldn't be allowed to give this the score I did. I can see why people found it amusing, but with the way that it was constructed I just didn't care for it.

Score: 0

"Well..."

submission: Britney Spear's *********

date: September 29, 2007

I'll start with some pretty constructive criticism; The color of the text in this flash as opposed to the color of the text in "B" is a lot better IMO; the powder blue gives the flash an intriguing feel to it. I'm not sure what else to say about the flash, other than that'd be an interesting premise if it were to actually happen.